Statement of Purpose Critique

[Rokinpsy]

Would anyone be willing to receive my statement of purpose and give me potential feedback? Seeing as it's one of the most critical parts of my application, I would love to know if I'm on the right track and to adjust specific aspects. Any feedback would be welcome.

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[psych.meout]

Uhhh, I would delete this and not post your personal statements openly on any public message board or website. You should see if individual posters would be willing to privately review (e.g. IM or email) your personal statements.