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Over the years, I've had the chance to read a good number of personal statements from prospective students. There are a few bits of advice I'd like to toss out there as application season looms on the horizon. I'd like to add the obvious disclaimer: people have been admitted with all kinds of statements; this isn't the be-all end-all of personal statement writing.
1. Pick a few strong experiences to talk about. You do not need to incorporate every single experience you've ever had into your statement, and doing so takes away from the weight you want to give to bigger, more meaningful events. Admissions committees can see all of your hours on your application, so no worry that something will be overlooked. Use the PS to emphasize what you want them to see and know about.
2. Know what you want your chosen experiences to convey about you as an applicant. Just describing what you did at that particular job doesn't add to the picture of who you are. Talk about a life lesson you learned or a positive trait you strengthened. Each of the few experiences you discuss should sculpt your personality to the reader.
3. Avoid the cliche and overused. We all love animals. We all had a childhood pet that went through something traumatic that we were a part of, and most of us were relatively young when we recognized veterinary medicine as a career option. Don't make that the crux of your statement. Show the admissions committee that you explored and decided upon veterinary medicine as a mature, adult person, even if it was just validation of a childhood goal. If I read a lot of statements about someone's pet, imagine how many admissions reads! If you really want to incorporate it, go for it, but recognize that it will be a very, very common theme. Stand out!
The same goes for words. My mom reads a ton of resumes for a government agency and she loathes words like "passion", "amazing" and "amazing opportunity". Don't use a thesaurus to the point that it's obvious, but find other ways to say the same thing.
4. Make it flow. Your statement doesn't have to be a story about you necessarily, but it does need to flow. Craft your persona for the committee and then tie that in to why you'd be a good candidate for veterinary medicine, their school, etc. Having a lot of people read your statement is really helpful in determining if it is cohesive. They will also catch errors in spelling and grammar that you missed, even after reading it over a thousand times.
Hope this was helpful. Others are free to chime in with their advice
1. Pick a few strong experiences to talk about. You do not need to incorporate every single experience you've ever had into your statement, and doing so takes away from the weight you want to give to bigger, more meaningful events. Admissions committees can see all of your hours on your application, so no worry that something will be overlooked. Use the PS to emphasize what you want them to see and know about.
2. Know what you want your chosen experiences to convey about you as an applicant. Just describing what you did at that particular job doesn't add to the picture of who you are. Talk about a life lesson you learned or a positive trait you strengthened. Each of the few experiences you discuss should sculpt your personality to the reader.
3. Avoid the cliche and overused. We all love animals. We all had a childhood pet that went through something traumatic that we were a part of, and most of us were relatively young when we recognized veterinary medicine as a career option. Don't make that the crux of your statement. Show the admissions committee that you explored and decided upon veterinary medicine as a mature, adult person, even if it was just validation of a childhood goal. If I read a lot of statements about someone's pet, imagine how many admissions reads! If you really want to incorporate it, go for it, but recognize that it will be a very, very common theme. Stand out!
The same goes for words. My mom reads a ton of resumes for a government agency and she loathes words like "passion", "amazing" and "amazing opportunity". Don't use a thesaurus to the point that it's obvious, but find other ways to say the same thing.
4. Make it flow. Your statement doesn't have to be a story about you necessarily, but it does need to flow. Craft your persona for the committee and then tie that in to why you'd be a good candidate for veterinary medicine, their school, etc. Having a lot of people read your statement is really helpful in determining if it is cohesive. They will also catch errors in spelling and grammar that you missed, even after reading it over a thousand times.
Hope this was helpful. Others are free to chime in with their advice