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I don't think it needs to go back to why medicine or why Albany since that is not the essay prompt. I would pick one defining activity/event that you are passionate about and use it to describe some characteristic you developed. That way the reader can 'discover' this new trait the same time you learned you possessed it. As a secondary effect, this will keep the essay more in the first-person perspective which will be refreshing for the person reviewing your application.