about the personal essay

[FutureDoc1016]

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can someone out there read mine and tell me what I can change/keep etc 🙂

 

[NewNick]

can someone out there read mine and tell me what I can change/keep etc 🙂

You can PM me.

 

[FutureDoc1016]

can someone out there read mine and tell me what I can change/keep etc 🙂

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[CuttinEmUp]

can someone out there read mine and tell me what I can change/keep etc 🙂

sure. ill take a look

 

[FutureDoc1016]

sure. ill take a look

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