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[comrade.mowgli]

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[Monkeymojo]

I'm going to be honest, I don't think it is quite strong enough in its current form.

 

[deleted889094]

This sounds more like a diversity essay than adversity. But I think it would be good for that

 

[comrade.mowgli]

I'm going to be honest, I don't think it is quite strong enough in its current form.

So just to clarify, this isn't actually the essay; it's just a potential theme/topic. Do you think it would work? Or should I scrap the topic entirely?

 

[Goro]

So just to clarify, this isn't actually the essay; it's just a potential theme/topic. Do you think it would work? Or should I scrap the topic entirely?

You can do better.

 

[comrade.mowgli]

You can do better.

Would you mind elaborating? Does it not reflect a sufficiently great degree of adversity? I was sort of thrown by the word "situation" in the JHU prompt, which seems to imply a discrete set of circumstances.