Advice for writing personal statement?

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cryhavoc

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So I have several life events that strongly steered me to wanting to pursue a career in medicine. I plan to express what happened, how it affected my views, and why that inspired me to pursue a career in medicine. It will be the truth, no embellishments.

But I read that your personal statement should address you weaknesses. I have everything on my application okay, but my science GPA is a bit low (depending on how good or bad I do this semester it could be 3.4 or 3.5).

Should I really address the true reasons why I got a few B's and a C? It just seems to random to talk about life changing events, and then be like, by the way, I got a C in Ochem 2. Do I have to address these few bumpy grades? I mean, my parents getting a divorce, and feeling alienated from my family did all occur in the semester I did poorly, but I don't want to make excuses. I just want to focus on why I want to be a doctor.

Do you have to explain grade weaknesses? I much rather talk about my weakness being I care too much, which sounds generic, but is true.
 
So I have several life events that strongly steered me to wanting to pursue a career in medicine. I plan to express what happened, how it affected my views, and why that inspired me to pursue a career in medicine. It will be the truth, no embellishments.

But I read that your personal statement should address you weaknesses. I have everything on my application okay, but my science GPA is a bit low (depending on how good or bad I do this semester it could be 3.4 or 3.5).

Should I really address the true reasons why I got a few B's and a C? It just seems to random to talk about life changing events, and then be like, by the way, I got a C in Ochem 2. Do I have to address these few bumpy grades? I mean, my parents getting a divorce, and feeling alienated from my family did all occur in the semester I did poorly, but I don't want to make excuses. I just want to focus on why I want to be a doctor.

Do you have to explain grade weaknesses? I much rather talk about my weakness being I care too much, which sounds generic, but is true.
No, don't explain grade weaknesses in the PS. It's for highlighting strengths and what you bring to the table, not reinforcing the fact that you have a few low grades.
 
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