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Hey everyone. I've never been active on this forum but I am excited to dive in as this application cycle approaches. This is a fantastic forum.
I have been thinking about the topic of my personal statement. One idea is based on the different ways I have helped others and the process of discovering that I have a deep passion for helping people.
The statement would start by explaining that I've always been very supportive and attentive to the people in my life. I have many examples of people I care about who helped get through tough times. For example, a friend in college who was struggling to make an identity for himself that he could be proud of; a widow I did odd jobs for and help to realize that her hoarding and neglect for her home was keeping her stuck in the wake of her husband's death; and the mother of my friend who tragically passed away who I would talk on the phone with for hours when she was going through phases of particularly severe and help her move through those times so that she could focus on learning how to enjoy her life.
Next, I would talk about how starting my job as an EMT was a realization that I didn't only have a passion for helping the people in my life, but also any stranger who I was equipped to help. A love for helping allowed me to stay calm during stressful and dramatic emergencies and also made me incredibly focussed on the comfort of our non-emergent transports, to the point that my patients would often express their appreciation for my going the extra mile.
The end would be an experience I had after I left my EMT job with a man who collapsed with cardiac symptoms in a bus station. When I left him I realized that there was no way to know what his outcome would be, and it could be quite bad. But as I reflected on the experience of being with him and comforting him, I started to cry on the bus because I was so happy just to have been able to be there with him at that terrifying time, to ease his fear as I assessed him and found that he was not dying. Nothing like that had ever made me come close to tears. It was a pretty profound experience.
Anyway, if anyone thinks this person statement idea falls short in some way, please feel free to criticize. I think it's a pretty good framework if I can effectively explain the things these experiences taught me. I don't have any volunteer experience so I'm thinking that discussing the ways I have helped people in my regular life. I wouldn't include this, but I never felt compelled to volunteer (foolish, I know) because helping individuals in my life was so fulfilling.
Any feedback/opinions would be greatly appreciated.
I have been thinking about the topic of my personal statement. One idea is based on the different ways I have helped others and the process of discovering that I have a deep passion for helping people.
The statement would start by explaining that I've always been very supportive and attentive to the people in my life. I have many examples of people I care about who helped get through tough times. For example, a friend in college who was struggling to make an identity for himself that he could be proud of; a widow I did odd jobs for and help to realize that her hoarding and neglect for her home was keeping her stuck in the wake of her husband's death; and the mother of my friend who tragically passed away who I would talk on the phone with for hours when she was going through phases of particularly severe and help her move through those times so that she could focus on learning how to enjoy her life.
Next, I would talk about how starting my job as an EMT was a realization that I didn't only have a passion for helping the people in my life, but also any stranger who I was equipped to help. A love for helping allowed me to stay calm during stressful and dramatic emergencies and also made me incredibly focussed on the comfort of our non-emergent transports, to the point that my patients would often express their appreciation for my going the extra mile.
The end would be an experience I had after I left my EMT job with a man who collapsed with cardiac symptoms in a bus station. When I left him I realized that there was no way to know what his outcome would be, and it could be quite bad. But as I reflected on the experience of being with him and comforting him, I started to cry on the bus because I was so happy just to have been able to be there with him at that terrifying time, to ease his fear as I assessed him and found that he was not dying. Nothing like that had ever made me come close to tears. It was a pretty profound experience.
Anyway, if anyone thinks this person statement idea falls short in some way, please feel free to criticize. I think it's a pretty good framework if I can effectively explain the things these experiences taught me. I don't have any volunteer experience so I'm thinking that discussing the ways I have helped people in my regular life. I wouldn't include this, but I never felt compelled to volunteer (foolish, I know) because helping individuals in my life was so fulfilling.
Any feedback/opinions would be greatly appreciated.