Any secondary readers still out there?

[mariposas905]

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I'm really struggling with some of these secondary prompts. I know exactly what I want to say (I tend to be a stronger interviewer than writer), but I'm not sure if it's coming out coherently in my essays. Would someone be willing to review a few for me? Thanks!

 

[Catalystik]

I'm really struggling with some of these secondary prompts. I know exactly what I want to say (I tend to be a stronger interviewer than writer), but I'm not sure if it's coming out coherently in my essays. Would someone be willing to review a few for me? Thanks!

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Anyone need secondary edits?

 

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[pms_testosterone]

Sure! Please paste it into a message to me (i.e. no links or Google docs, etc.).