anyone able to read my statement of purpose?

[mand rae]

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I just busted out my ptcas application essay, whew. Prompt: "Describe your decision making process in choosing physical therapy as a career choice versus other health care careers." This is my first draft and I haven't gotten any feedback for it yet, so if anyone is out there who would be willing and able to give it a read and let me know what they think that would be WONDERFUL! Thank you in advance!


EDIT:
I just tried out http://www.paperrater.com, which I saw suggested on a different thread and got a grade of 91 (A). This makes me more confident that my grammar and spelling are alright, but I would still love feedback on content, wording, flow etc.

 

[Hopein2010]

PM me....I'll critique 🙂

 

[mand rae]

thank you! just sent it your way 🙂

 

[Junta87]

Please feel free to send it to me- [email protected]- I'd be happy to give you my feedback!

 

[DPTMAMBA]

you can pm it too and ill try my best!

 

[jdaniels360]

PM me and i'll take a look.

 

[mccomasg09]

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[spartangal]

[email protected]

I have written about 5 different PT school essays..I am sure I can give u some feedback!