Anyone up to critiquing a PS?

[plumerias]

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Title says it all. I'm about to send this to a LOR writer in the next day or two, so I wanted to buff it up a bit. It's a little dry right now.

Thank you very much in advance!

 

[Dental2000]

PM me if you are still interested in someone critiquing your PS