Anyone willing to quickly read a LOI?... greatly appreciated

[makeshift123]

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I'm snowed in today, so I thought I would work on a LOI/update that I kept putting off. would anyone be willing to read it and give me some feedback? it's my first one, so I don't know if i did it right, and I really loved this school, so anything would help.


Its only 3.5 paragraphs with one of them being the update that you can skip. I can send it to you in a PM instead of email.

Thanks a lot!!

 

[startswithb]

I'm snowed in today, so I thought I would work on a LOI/update that I kept putting off. would anyone be willing to read it and give me some feedback? it's my first one, so I don't know if i did it right, and I really loved this school, so anything would help.


Its only 3.5 paragraphs with one of them being the update that you can skip. I can send it to you in a PM instead of email.

Thanks a lot!!

I would. I like proofreading.

 

[i love cookies]

Sure, would love to. PM me.

 

[BlueElmo]

I can do it too.

 

[makeshift123]

Thanks, I PMed it to you. The feedback is very much appreciated.

 

[CaliGirl14]

...sure

 

[UnfeatyOblation]

Sure, I can take a look.

 

[cardiology88]

you can pm me if you want

 

[sweetsaja]

sure i can help just pm me 🙂