Anyone willing to read & edit my secondaries?

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I'm currently pre-writing some secondaries, and I'm a really bad writer so I could use help articulating my thoughts/getting my points across. Is anyone willing to completely scrutinize and tear apart my writing?

 

[Mr.Smile12]

I'm currently pre-writing some secondaries, and I'm a really bad writer so I could use help articulating my thoughts/getting my points across. Is anyone willing to completely scrutinize and tear apart my writing?

Have you already gone through your campus writing center or your references?