Well, I'm applying to University of Texas at Austin--this Natural Science Honors program and it asks me what i want to do...since it's the holidays i have no one else to refer to but you guys...so can yall help me? the first asked about my goals::: here's what i wrote: Raised in a family whose interests have surrounded the sciences, I also have grown very fond of the idea of producing solutions in a problem domain. Amidst the application process, I have been looking for career options that could catch my eye. Although the search was arduous, I found that there were a few options open which I believed to allow for breakthrough opportunities for not only myself, but also for future generations. Neuroscience has recently emerged as that field which fosters countless opportunities for research, and in a complex society, it is necessary to simplify so we can truly understand how we, as a species, perceive our surroundings. Medicine has also caught my attention, seeing as how I enjoy nothing less but to serve the people in need. I feel as though if I pursue both choices, that as a person, I can ensure myself, and also, others around me, that I am leaning towards a progressive society, in which, I help everyone who has been left behind and need help getting back up. what can i change or what should i write...keep it short please!