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I'm a white, middle class applicant with nothing super unique about me. I was thinking about writing about growing up as the older brother to adopted African American siblings. I would talk about how it's made me more aware of my own privilege, vigilant about inequality, and driven to try to understand what it's like to be a minority in this country.
I feel like that's kind of interesting but could be a stretch to say this perspective/outlook on life makes me diverse.
What do you guys think? Would this be an okay thing to write about or would it be in poor taste? Any way I could frame it to make it sound better?
Thanks for any feedback!
If you indicate the limitations of your experience and they genuinely helped you be "woke" as it were, then I would write about it. I've met plenty of white people including my brothers who, as a result of limited exposure to cultural diversity, are ignorant to struggles imposed by the existence of the race social construct. If you are acutely aware of these things thanks to your brother, then this is a great topic. I strongly suggest though, that you acknowledge the limitations of your secondary experience (something I wish I'd noted more explicitly in my essays). Exposure to cultural diversity is NOT the same as being an individual of a marginalized identity.
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I love you used WOKE in your eloquent prose hahaha