Can someone help me with my PS?

[tommytwoties]

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I am trying to get my PS off the ground and could use some help. I have a second draft I would love someone experienced to look at. I would really appreciate it, I have a very good story but some problems telling it.

 

[Ehwic]

Sure, PM me with it.

 

[rufflev]

Same, PM me with your PS.