can someone please look over my personal statement and tell me what you think

[cfmoreno]

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I want to know if my content, structure, and flow is alright?
Also, what should I cut because my personal statement is wayyy too long

two things about essay:
-I am aware that there are probably a lot of grammatical errors
-I am still doing my conclusion

Applying to MD, DO, and Caribbean medical schools ( though if anybody had any thoughts or reco's on the Caribbean or other int'l medical schools, they would be greatly appreciated.

this is my first draft of this particular essay and I really want to get my essay in early this year. I had things come up this last year and I was unable to apply the last cycle for both DO and MD.

 

[NotASerialKiller]

Applying to MD, DO, and Caribbean medical schools ( though if anybody had any thoughts or reco's on the Caribbean or other int'l medical schools, they would be greatly appreciated.

I can help you with your Caribbean PS, just write "me hav money ($$$)"

You can change it slightly to avoid plagiarism. Or not, they won't care

 

[1203xx]

PM me! I can take a look 🙂