Can someone proofred my PS?

[canadanon]

Wondering if someone could proofread my PS. Let me know and I will PM you.

 

[FutureDrB]

PM me and I'll be glad to read and provide feedback.

 

[Renegade]

You can pm me as well and I'll let you know what I think.

 

[OBK]

You can pm me as well and I'll let you know what I think.

x2

 

[Polo423]

feel free to PM me as well

 

[lefty175]

I would also take a look at your statement.

 

[canadanon]

Guys, I just submitted. Thanks a lot!