Can someone read my personal statement?

[dn14]

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I've already submitted so I can't change it but I wanted to see what someone experienced on here thought of my PS I wrote for this cycle. I am applying DO. Please message me if you don't mind just reading it and giving me some thoughts. Nothing too harsh because I can't change it now but more like what you think of it

 

[TheBoneDoctah]

Sure, send it to me. @dn14

 

[AlteredScale]

Same here! PM me and I'll give you my email