Can you read my personal statement???

I was wondering if there is anyone out there who would be willing to read my personal statements. I am writing so many for so many schools and the pharmcas one, I want to make sure I do well this year. This is my second year applying and i'm trying to do the best that I can.

I guess if there are people willing to read it, I would appreciate it. And if you are a current pharmacy student or a graduate, I would appreciate it even more b/c at least you've been through it and have a better idea of what should be there and what is lacking. In any case, I would appreciate any help. Thanks in advance.

I guess if you can send me a private message I would appreciate it, I can email it to you from there. Thanks again in advance. Good luck to everyone else applying.