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Hey guys! I just needed some advice about my personal statement.
My Freshman year my parents got a divorce, my mom was diagnosed with depression, and my sister was battling PTSD. I worked in my hometown 2 hours away from my university as an assistant manager and had to skip a lot of school to be able to keep that job. My grades were bad, but not absolutely terrible (2W's, a C+ in Physics I and a C in Bio II Lab, everything else was pretty average, leaving me with a 3.0cGPA and 2.86sGPA. The 2 W's really sting though). My sophomore year GPA was a 3.8 and my junior year GPA is a 4.0 so my overall sGPA is 3.54 and cGPA is 3.67. Is that a strong enough upward trend to mention?
But honestly, will the admissions committee really care? In my rough draft I talked about how my mom's and sister's conditions ultimately verified my desire to be a doctor, but I'm just wondering if I'm better off skipping the story and just talking about positive experiences instead.
Thanks in advance for all your help! 🙂
My Freshman year my parents got a divorce, my mom was diagnosed with depression, and my sister was battling PTSD. I worked in my hometown 2 hours away from my university as an assistant manager and had to skip a lot of school to be able to keep that job. My grades were bad, but not absolutely terrible (2W's, a C+ in Physics I and a C in Bio II Lab, everything else was pretty average, leaving me with a 3.0cGPA and 2.86sGPA. The 2 W's really sting though). My sophomore year GPA was a 3.8 and my junior year GPA is a 4.0 so my overall sGPA is 3.54 and cGPA is 3.67. Is that a strong enough upward trend to mention?
But honestly, will the admissions committee really care? In my rough draft I talked about how my mom's and sister's conditions ultimately verified my desire to be a doctor, but I'm just wondering if I'm better off skipping the story and just talking about positive experiences instead.
Thanks in advance for all your help! 🙂