I have gotten through so many changes to my PS. (Switched paragraphs, edited flow. Changed some directions on where the point is headed.) Some members on here did read my essay, but haven't gotten back to me and I have changed it quite a bit. (Not really the general concept just more of the flow.)
Would anyone mind to give me a quick and dirty look at PS and give first impressions. I would really appreciate it.
Would anyone mind to give me a quick and dirty look at PS and give first impressions. I would really appreciate it.
