Could someone read my ps please?

jz123 · Jun 15, 2016

Roy Williams · Jun 15, 2016

sure, pm me. I'll get to it by the end of the day.

tc434 · Jun 15, 2016

If you want to send it to me pm I would be happy to read

FlowerGirl35 · Jun 15, 2016

wish the character limit was higher :bang:

jz123 · Jun 15, 2016

thank you all for helping, i would first go to my school writing center to fix the grammar mistakes

Toothout · Jun 15, 2016

jz123 said:
thank you all for helping, i would first go to my school writing center to fix the grammar mistakes

Doc toothache might also help

Likkriue · Jun 15, 2016

CallMeDoct said:
Doc toothache might also help

He won't sugar coat for you, which is the best part about his critique. If your PS is **** he will tell you it is.

Toothout · Jun 15, 2016

That's what you need. I might even send mine lol

salreq · Jun 15, 2016

I have some time to read it if you need more feedback

MrBoneless · Jun 16, 2016

Are any of you open to reading mine as well? I just finished the rough draft and am working on content.

Toothout · Jun 16, 2016

MrBoneless said:
Are any of you open to reading mine as well? I just finished the rough draft and am working on content.

Doc toothache

jz123 · Jun 17, 2016

rmarder said:
sure, pm me. I'll get to it by the end of the day.

hi, do u still have some time to read my PS?

Roy Williams · Jun 17, 2016

jz123 said:
hi, do u still have some time to read my PS?

sure