True but there's acceptable cheesy and then there's "Lubdub, Lubdub... the sound of life" cheesy.
A good friend did. A good friend also linked this thread to support his advice.
I told him to rewrite just that one sentence, because the rest is good. I don't want to interfere with his overall message, so I just recommended to change it to "Even at a young age, I was fascinated with the methods and instruments used to examine the human body; sourced from my pediatrician's stethoscope, my own heart's drumming beat was first-hand evidence of our hidden machinery." Still kind of corny, but he really, really wants this whole I was inquisitive at a young age vibe.
I once had to read a PS that graphically described the applicant's conception in the opening line. It was a lead-in to when he became convinced of his path to medicine.
Was this a horribly misguided attempt at humor? I shudder to think there was some sincerity to it.
Nah ur gud
It appeared to be a part of his belief system...
Ahh, so now I feel torn between cringing and not wanting to be bigoted.
I didnt necessarily infer it to be an Evangelican Christian belief system. Besides, I have spent enough time with conservative Christians to know any "graphic description" of conception would be verboten.
It's OK...the interest in Medicine is either evolutionary, or revolutionary.
The weather?
Guess you're not at UCR, cause we now have people complaining about the weather there. 😕
U rember bein' a sperm ._.
I've been obsessed since I was 5 when my parents told me that firemen had a high chance of being hurt or killed on the job. I was like "oh I'll just be a doctor and look at bones all day instead". Bad reason, good result.
Smol Freak7: " I wanna be a firefighter!"
That is almost literally how it went. It was in a Denny's. I just got really lucky that I ended up actually loving the field rather than doing it because it's always what I wanted to do. I'd give 5 year old freak7 a high 5.
