A premed consultant with a popular YouTube Channel ("Application Renovation") centers each episode on critiquing the failed application of high stat applicants.
His general advice: (a) activities should always include a "story" illustrating the activity's impact on an applicant, (b) the personal statement should also "show, not tell" by using storytelling to explain why medicine.
I'm curious to hear what the SDN community has to say about this advice. I recall some ad coms opining that telling a story often comes across badly.
It seems to me the consultant pays too little attention to school list. The first student only applied to 4 schools. The second student - an uber high stats applicant with a 4.0/521 didn't apply to Wash U/NYU/Northwestern/Hopkins/Yale and a host of other high stat schools. The consultant focuses on the wording of activities and personal statement to the exclusion of correcting the school list. Your thoughts?