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LunaOri Full Member Staff member Volunteer Staff Verified Member 5+ Year Member Verified Expert Joined May 16, 2020 Messages 2,160 Reaction score 5,208 Aug 26, 2022 #2 How did you advocate for him?
LunaOri Full Member Staff member Volunteer Staff Verified Member 5+ Year Member Verified Expert Joined May 16, 2020 Messages 2,160 Reaction score 5,208 Aug 27, 2022 #3 That sounds like advocacy. What did you learn from the experience?
LunaOri Full Member Staff member Volunteer Staff Verified Member 5+ Year Member Verified Expert Joined May 16, 2020 Messages 2,160 Reaction score 5,208 Aug 28, 2022 #4 I think it sounds like it has the potential to be a good essay.
Mr.Smile12 Admissions advisor Staff member Lifetime Donor Verified Member 10+ Year Member Faculty Verified Expert Gold Donor Joined Oct 14, 2011 Messages 27,608 Reaction score 19,993 Aug 28, 2022 #5 With the additional details and insight, try it out.
D DNAJB6 Full Member 5+ Year Member Joined Aug 20, 2019 Messages 843 Reaction score 996 Sep 5, 2022 #6 You could also omit the whole part about him being your cousin and refer to him as a neighbor.