essay about experiance in a dental office

[Opulala]

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guys! i have a problem! a huge one! i am not american. i ve been here for 2 years only. i am on dental assistant program. i am going to finish it in the end of the may. we have to write essay about our expariance in a dental office during our practice over there. my teacher said: dont write something bad but good only. i have an axample of someone`s assay. i have good imagination but i am bad in gramma.
thats what i need:
write a one -page paper ( a complete page in Times New Roman, 12 pt front size with a minimum of three paragraphs) of a meaningful experience based on a negative or positive experience occuring during the clinical rotation. paper will be evaluated on: content (20 points), gramma (20 points), spelling (20), and punctuation (20) and format(20).
i am scared! because i am not good in it!
i need someone help or at least something which might help me... i do A grades only, but i am so close to B (90.7%) that makes me feel bad. because i try so hard? spend more time reading books and searching something in internet than other girls in my class.
please guys! help me with something.
the experience can be with general words... nothing spasific. or at least some website with essay on this topic...
thank you all!

 

[Opulala]

i cant upload that pics with assay. the file is to big and there is no chance to make it smaller.😡

 

[Opulala]

so nobody can help with some websites or something else?🙁

 

[notin]

you are supposed to write an essay about your personal experience in a dentist's office. have you already written it and are looking for help editing it? or, what sort of websites are you looking for?

 

[Opulala]

no! i am going to write it this week end. i just thought? someone can give me some websites with student`s essays or something like that ( i have something like that in my country/ but I think you dont have it here). all students put their diploma`s works or just some assays online for other students/ to help each other, maybe copy some papers for themselves and etc.
and i thought it would help me to write my essay. its hard for me to write some essay in english? i do it vary good in Russian. soemoen told me that its easy to write the essay instead of me, than to correct my mistakes. and like i said above, i need exelant punctuation, gramma, because its a part of assay.

 

[Opulala]

yeah personal experience in a dentist's office!
i ve never thought i will work in this shere. i learned a lot in a dental office. at first iwas scared to assist the doctor. i gained some experiance and i fee lconfident now and easily can assist the dentist. everybody were so nice and helpful to me. i learned how to act with kids, help them to calm down..
you know, something like that!
short sentances look bad, and long ( complicated ones) i cant write without mistakes

 

[Vicviper]

Write the paper and then have someone edit it for you.

 

[Opulala]

http://my.mail.ru/mail/marriott302/?from_commercial=17
try here to see example of assay. the text ( picture) are next to Simpsons, just click on it!
i hope it works