Feedback on disadvantaged statement

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Anyone willing to take a look at my disadvantaged statement? its the last thing I'm debating on whether I should include before hitting submit. I'm not sure its something I should bring up really (fear of sounding like I'm making excuses) but I think a read with some feedback will def help out. Appreciate it in advance.

 

[deleted922750]

Send it

 

[EMTinside]

I can also take a look

 

[NoSleeptilBKLN]

I'll take a look at it.

 

[starlord005]

Ill take a look too if you dont mind