Feedback on Personal Statement?

[SteyrSteven]

I will be submitting my app within the next day or two. all I need to finish is my personal statement. I have been getting positive feedback from friends and doctors I know, but I am afraid they aren't being totally unbiased. Can one of you kind strangers take an objective look at my PS?

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[Tardis42]

I will be submitting my app within the next day or two. all I need to finish is my personal statement. I have been getting positive feedback from friends and doctors I know, but I am afraid they aren't being totally unbiased. Can one of you kind strangers take an objective look at my PS?

I could try, I'd give the best advice as possible.

 

[SteyrSteven]

I could try, I'd give the best advice as possible.

Just the fact that you don't know me makes your input valuable. I'll send you a PM.

edit: and of course, if there's anything I can do to help you in your application cycle, feel free to ask.

 

[ZorkDork1]

pm meh

 

[SteyrSteven]

pm meh

will do