Feedback on Personal Statement?

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Hi Guys,
I've been working on my PS for a while, not sure if I was heading in the right direction. Would someone be willing to give it a read and offer some feedback?!

Thanks!
 
Pm me and I'll take a look.

I can help with grammar, tell you whether or not it's fluent, and give you an overall impression.


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I can take a look at it too if you want another reader. PM me.
 
I can help read.
 
I'm trying to write mine right now (not for this upcoming admissions cycle) could I read yours? I'd love to see how it flows as i feel like i have 4 paragraphs none of which correspond to each other


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You guys are so awesome! Thanks so much!
 
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AcaffinatedMinD said:
I'm trying to write mine right now (not for this upcoming admissions cycle) could I read yours? I'd love to see how it flows as i feel like i have 4 paragraphs none of which correspond to each other


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Sure! It's in its very rough beginnings though...
 
I'll take a gander 🙂
 
Hey guys, I took a few weeks to rewrite my PS... would anyone mind giving my new draft a read?


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