Feedback on Personal Statement?

[aharr157]

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Hi Guys,
I've been working on my PS for a while, not sure if I was heading in the right direction. Would someone be willing to give it a read and offer some feedback?!

Thanks!

 

[Funny_Current]

Pm me and I'll take a look.

I can help with grammar, tell you whether or not it's fluent, and give you an overall impression.


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[aharr157]

Pm me and I'll take a look.

I can help with grammar, tell you whether or not it's fluent, and give you an overall impression.


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Thanks so much!!

 

[TheRealJohnDorian]

I can take a look at it too if you want another reader. PM me.

 

[aharr157]

I can take a look at it too if you want another reader. PM me.

The more eyes on it the better! Thanks!

 

[Nomtastic]

I can help read.

 

[bioboy23]

PM it to me!


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[AcaffinatedMinD]

I'm trying to write mine right now (not for this upcoming admissions cycle) could I read yours? I'd love to see how it flows as i feel like i have 4 paragraphs none of which correspond to each other


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[UnassumingToad]

I would love to help. PM it to me 🙂

 

[aharr157]

You guys are so awesome! Thanks so much!

 

[aharr157]

I'm trying to write mine right now (not for this upcoming admissions cycle) could I read yours? I'd love to see how it flows as i feel like i have 4 paragraphs none of which correspond to each other


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Sure! It's in its very rough beginnings though...

 

[spikes]

I'll take a gander 🙂

 

[aharr157]

Hey guys, I took a few weeks to rewrite my PS... would anyone mind giving my new draft a read?


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[kitkat13]

Hey guys, I took a few weeks to rewrite my PS... would anyone mind giving my new draft a read?


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I can! 🙂

 

[UnassumingToad]

Happy to read over it!

 

[tinyantibody]

Hey guys, I took a few weeks to rewrite my PS... would anyone mind giving my new draft a read?


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Happy to edit, PM me 🙂

 

[swishr]

Sure, PM me!