I don't disagree with this, I was just saying that as you gain more education your ability to think may improve and your knowledge base may give you a specific example to throw into one of the essays, which is something they like to see. But it also comes down a lot to how naturally good of a writer you are as well. Some people are just naturally better writers than others, and our educational system doesn't do much at all these days to force those that are bad writers to get better.