As you may know there are five main health concepts: physical, mental, spiritual, emotional and social. What are the challenges posed by those concepts held by health professionals and the general public? Any ideas? 🙂
I've been thinking about this a lot over the past day. Not actually trying to answer the question, mind you, but rather the nature of the question being asked.
See, the OP will almost assuredly become a healthcare administrator. He is already speaking their language. It's not so bad per se. It's a great way to get involved in healthcare without the messy business of learning basic sciences or interacting with patients. You just need to be well-intentioned but paternalistic, and enjoy stringing words together. You find some likeminded individuals, attend catered lunch meetings, and produce reams of paper together full of words that don't mean a whole lot.
Take the OP's first sentence. He's asking about health concepts. If pressed, I could probably define the words "health" and "concept," but this is the first I've ever heard of "health concepts." It's probably something somebody cooked up in order to publish a paper to justify their tenure tracked position in a University.
Furthermore, he lists not 4, not 6, but 5 health concepts. To make a good list, its contents should be mutually exclusive and exhaustive. For instance, in a podiatry progress note, we usually cover 4 systems (integument, vascular, nervous, and musculoskeletal). Objective findings usually fall into one, and only one, of these 4 systems. Sure, we might mention a psychiatric finding if a patient seems a little off, but those 4 systems are basically all we need.
So how do we categorize, for example, "financial health?" Is it included? We clearly can't add it as another health concept because then there would be 6 items, and 6 is a much less interesting number than 5. Is financial health part of social health or mental health or emotional health? The answer of course is that it doesn't matter because this is a bunch of nonsense anyway.
This brings me to the second sentence. I had to read it 3 times to understand it! Certainly, it's grammatically correct, but we can tell the OP loves layering on the participial phrases. In fact, complicated sentence structure is an administrator's best friend, since it bores and confuses the reader into believing that real content is present. An old adage is apropriate: "If you can't dazzle em with brilliance, baffle em with baloney."