help on PS

[DDSWannaBe2007]

Hi, im seeking professional help on my PS.

besides grammar, i wanna opinions on my contents and helps on condensing it (still too long!!! 🙁 ) Any suggestions where i should go ?!

Thanks ~~ 😀

Congrats to all acceptance for class of 2010!!!

 

[dexadental]

I had the opportunity for a few SDNers to review my personal statement before I applied last cycle, if you want me to review it, I wouldn't mind:

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