Help on Secondaries

[Dhooy7]

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I have about 5 secondaries I'd like to get in ASAP. I'm just needing some help cutting down on characters. Anyone able to help me even lookover one? I'd greatly appreciate it. Thanks!

 

[madiso30]

I’d rather slide my butt across broken glass than look at another secondary. But some advice I’d give is to look at big words and see if you can change them to a shorter one. Sounds silly, I know, but you’d be surprised how many big words you may have needlessly used.