High School Senior looking for proofreading! Please help!

[alpacalover]

I'm applying to UoP for their dental program. I finished my personal statement and I need someone else to proofread my essay! Please let me know if you are so so kind and is willing to help out! I will PM it to you. Thank you.

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[Nelson16]

I would recommend cutting down on the exclamation points!

 

[alpacalover]

I would recommend cutting down on the exclamation points!

Haha sorry. I tried to sound enthusiastic and didn't notice I used it with every sentence. Thank you sooooooo much for you help!