How do I write a strong Letter of Intent?

[Dhooy7]

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I was waitlisted to a school I'd really like to attend. Any tips, resources, or examples (of strong letters of intents that have been successful? I really want to write a great LOI and would appreciate any tips.

 

[AlbinoHawk DO]

School mission and specifics - mention how you fit and how it helps your goals. Mention exactly how you'd make a difference to them. Go into painful detail to show knowledge about the program and avoid fluff

 

[Dhooy7]

I have a rough draft if anyone is willing to look over it.
Letter of Intent

 

[FMCdoc]

I have a follow up question:
I sent in a LOI to my top school that I was waitlisted at post-interview. However, I just realized after sending the letter that I included my AAMC ID # instead of my AACOMAS ID #. Should I send a second email including my AACOMAS ID # or should I simply leave it as is?