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If this is for an application essay, you aren't expected to know medical terminology. And every adcomm reading the essay won't know what those terms mean, so gyngyn is right, just describe what you witnessed in lay terms and more readers will understand what you want to convey.What is the proper term to desribe patients that are disconnected from reality? Or is disconnected from reality a good way to describe them?
I'm talking about patients that have . . .
Describe what you experienced without giving a diagnosis.
If this is for an application essay, you aren't expected to know medical terminology. And every adcomm reading the essay won't know what those terms mean, so gyngyn is right, just describe what you witnessed in lay terms and more readers will understand what you want to convey.
I think that the example makes it more interesting to read, so I'd keep it.So do you think I should say something along the lines of: . . . . Or is the description unnecessary
I think that the example makes it more interesting to read, so I'd keep it.
I've removed the details that are identifiable. Is that sufficient?Thanks. Do you think you could delete what you quoted from me?
I've removed the details that are identifiable. Is that sufficient?