How does this sentence sound???

[GOBUCKY!]

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Hey Guys,

I am writing an essay for UW-Mad secondary and need your opinion on a sentence:

I would like to engage in research on developing interventions to improve healthcare access and compliance of underserved populations.

or 👍 👎

I would like to engage in research on developing interventions to improve healthcare access for and the compliance of underserved populations.


Thanks,

GOBUCKY!

 

[drguy22]

Hey Guys,

I am writing an essay for UW-Mad secondary and need your opinion on a sentence:

I would like to engage in research on developing interventions to improve healthcare access and compliance of underserved populations.

or 👍 👎

I would like to engage in research on developing interventions to improve healthcare access for and the compliance of underserved populations.


Thanks,

GOBUCKY!

first one....but i think thats kinda odd too.

I am interested in researching interventions that can ultimately improve healthcare access and compliance in underserved polulations. hows that???

 

[GOBUCKY!]

That's even better. Thanks 😀

 

[drguy22]

That's even better. Thanks 😀

no problemo 🙂 u can steal tat sentence if u want..🙂