I know you guys are busy, but could you please read my personal statement?

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Hi dental students. I know you guys are extremely busy but if you would not mind reading my personal statement before I submit this coming week I'd really appreciate it. I feel that I'm approaching my final draft and would love some more feedback on how to make it better. Thank you in advance.

 

[Guy Smiley]

I would make it a little longer. Also it doesn't say much about you as a person. Be sure to cover that. Otherwise, great statement.👍