I'm not applying yet, but I do have some general advice about personal statements. I tutor in my college's writing center and I've helped students write better Law school, Fulbright scholarship, etc. personal statements. The key to any personal statement is for the school to see <i>you</i> in the writing. The reader should finish your statement knowing something about you that is different from the masses, even if that something different is a key aspect of your personality. Even if your ECs are very common, you haven't traveled, and you don't feel that you are very stand-out, your personal statement can help you to do that. Make sure that you write in your own distinct voice. If you want to integrate your activities, don't just list them. Use them to show a cohesive theme or type of interest. Also, if you want to show that you have certain traits, Show. Don't tell. I once wrote a personal statement and used the examples of my church activities, peer counseling, S.A.D.D., etc. to show that I was a compassionate and socially aware person. I also think it's a good idea to carefully proofread (read aloud to hear more mistakes) and get an English major or writing tutor to check your grammar and organization. Good luck!