Is there anyone available to critique my personal statement?

[LuluLovesMe]

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I really want to submit soon, but I feel my personal statement is weak. I have checked the PS reader thread and it seems that all the readers either already have too many statements to read over or have not been active on forums in the past few days.

Is anyone willing to give me an honest critique and tips for how I can improve mine?

 

[Summertime012]

I really want to submit soon, but I feel my personal statement is weak. I have checked the PS reader thread and it seems that all the readers either already have too many statements to read over or have not been active on forums in the past few days.

Is anyone willing to give me an honest critique and tips for how I can improve mine?

Sure I will take a look. PM me

 

[LuluLovesMe]

Sent! Thank you

 

[LuluLovesMe]

Bump

 

[Thego2guy]

Bump

PM it to me.

 

[040111333]

I'd be happy to look over it. You can PM me.

 

[LuluLovesMe]

PM'd!