Looking for feedback on "Final" Draft of my PS

[lodgecountry]

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I have gotten lots of good feedback from here, and have tried to take all into consideration when reworking my personal statement. Just looking for some honest input. Thanks!

Also, I know there's a "thread" or something for personal statements, but I haven't had much luck with that as there are long waiting lists and whatnot.

 

[tantacles]

All requests for personal statement edits should be posted in the thread below without exception. Closing thread.

http://forums.studentdoctor.net/thr...ment-guide-and-reader-list-2014-2015.1061871/