Looking for personal statement critique/feedback

[brabaroni]

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I've been working on my personal statement for a few months now, and finally came up with a new draft I'm more comfortable with. I threw a lot of the previous ideas out, and had to do a lot of soul searching to make this one! With that said, I feel like it answers the prompt a million times better than my first few, but that might not be saying much. If any body would be willing to read/edit my PS and give feedback that would be greatly appreciated! Thanks

 

[IJumpYouJumpJack]

I can read it!

 

[dwgrubbs1s]

PM me and I can read it.

 

[liquidsodium]

Happy to give some feedback


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[deforestasian]

Feel free to send it my way as well!

 

[PatchA]

Happy to read it!

 

[bobeanie95]

I can too!

 

[Fdsa2495]

Available to read it too!

 

[swishr]

I can give you feedback!