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CamdenStick

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worked on it for a week straight. im done and revising but cant make it good. I think I suck. oh well.
anyone wants to read it right now?
 
I'll read somebodys on Thursday night if somebody will read mine then (if I actually finish it)!! I work every day until then!
 
I copied my friend's style. I am not too comfortable with his style. I like to write mine in a chrnological order. Maybe I should re-write it "my way"
 
I wrote my stuff and my experience. i tried to copy his writing style since he says it would be better, but i dont know
 
I wrote my stuff and my experience. i tried to copy his writing style since he says it would be better, but i dont know

If you don't like the way it's turned out, that's probably why. You may want to re-write and "make it your own."

I'd be happy to read and critique it if you'd like.
 
camdenstick

i got accepted to ccom and have nothign to do so i'll read it if you want. you dont even have to do mine in return lol
pm me or just email me. its my username @hotmail.com

g luck