my personal statement sucks!

[CamdenStick]

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worked on it for a week straight. im done and revising but cant make it good. I think I suck. oh well.
anyone wants to read it right now?

 

[CamdenStick]

at least give feedback how i shoudl edit now?

 

[StringerBell]

at least give feedback how i shoudl edit now?

CamdenStick?
Is that a reference to ballparks for teams that wear orange and black?

 

[DocInProgress]

Let someone else read it and give you suggestions. It's the best way to go! Remember, more is better!

 

[surferdoc]

I'll read somebodys on Thursday night if somebody will read mine then (if I actually finish it)!! I work every day until then!

 

[CamdenStick]

I copied my friend's style. I am not too comfortable with his style. I like to write mine in a chrnological order. Maybe I should re-write it "my way"

 

[StringerBell]

I copied my friend's style. I am not too comfortable with his style. I like to write mine in a chrnological order. Maybe I should re-write it "my way"

It is a personal statement, after all.

 

[CamdenStick]

I wrote my stuff and my experience. i tried to copy his writing style since he says it would be better, but i dont know

 

[Jpc984]

I look at yours if you look at mine... just pm me

 

[grinchick5]

I wrote my stuff and my experience. i tried to copy his writing style since he says it would be better, but i dont know

If you don't like the way it's turned out, that's probably why. You may want to re-write and "make it your own."

I'd be happy to read and critique it if you'd like.

 

[bigdog8829]

camdenstick

i got accepted to ccom and have nothign to do so i'll read it if you want. you dont even have to do mine in return lol
pm me or just email me. its my username @hotmail.com

g luck

 

[Lamont]

PM me with it

 

[ellasmom]

PM it to me and I will help you out

 

[bigdog8829]

i sent it bak 2 u OP