I highly doubt that anyone on this forum will share their personal statements - they are just that, personal. That being said, however, I see a lot of people that offer to critique other's statements after they've been written.
I don't mean to be harsh here (and maybe, just maybe, I'm misreading your intent), but I really really hate it when people don't put in the effort for essays and the like and expect to be able to copy/paste information from the internet. Do some soul-searching and brainstorming and see what you can come up with on your own - you'll respect yourself more for it in the long run.
