Need PS help!

[dingyibvs]

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Hey everyone, I'm a reapplicant and I need some help with my PS. I tried contacting the guys on the PS readers list but only one has offered to help so I thought I'd try another route. Would any of you be willing to read my PS and offer me some suggestions? English isn't my first language and, as you can imagine, my parents can't help me much there either, so any help would be greatly appreciated!

Thanks in advance,



David

 

[KG216]

I wouldn't mind reading it. Are you looking for grammatical help or just an overall critique on message/theme?

 

[ensuii]

I know where you're coming from; English was my second language and even though I've managed to get a pretty good hold of it, I sometimes have trouble with language. Let me know if you want me to give your PS a read through.

 

[dingyibvs]

I wouldn't mind reading it. Are you looking for grammatical help or just an overall critique on message/theme?

Either/Both would be fine, thanks!

 

[Californian]

i will help you out!

 

[ABRuniverse]

i will help you out!

Me too? i just finished yet another draft of my PS and seeing as it's 8200 characters at the moment I could definitely use some assistance!

 

[medicalfool]

Can someone help me out with PS too? I reallyy want some feedback. Thanks.

 

[dingyibvs]

Thanks for all who offered to help, I've sent you guys PMs with my background and PS. Thanks again!