I am planning to transfer universities next fall. So before I submit my essays, I wanted to know if anyone with experience in these sort of things would read over one essay and a sort of pseudo personal statement. The main essay is medically related, so I figured it would fit in here. Any critiques or comments would be highly appreciated. Just post here and I will PM you about them, or simply PM me and I will send the prompt and essays to you. Thanks in advance.