Personal Statement...Any Input??

[mailee88]

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Thanks to everyone who read my PS...and thank you for the input. If anyone else is interested in reading this, please email me...the more people the better!! Thanks! [email protected]

 

[scootad.]

very interesting piece! just a couple grammatical things - change "loose" to "lose", "experiencing the world outside the classroom" should be separated from the sentence before it. Also the last couple sentences are good but kind of drags and doesnt quite "fit" with the stuff before it. But you have the workings of a great PS!