Personal Statement Critiquing?

[deleted244469]

I recently finished the first draft of my personal statement and could use some constructive criticism/tough love on it. Would anyone mind reading it for me and giving me some thoughts? I would really appreciate it. I'm trying knock this thing out of the park and I know its missing some things. Just can't put my finger on them.

-Kovy

 

[sunshinefl]

I'm a nobody premed but if you just want a second set of eyes, I'm willing.

 

[SpicyFalafel]

I will be glad to take a look at it.

 

[mathnerd88]

Hopefully you looked at my comments and understood what I was trying to explain to you. I think you should restructure your PS to not reflect any weaknesses.

 

[deleted244469]

Hopefully you looked at my comments and understood what I was trying to explain to you. I think you should restructure your PS to not reflect any weaknesses.

Definitely! I totally forgot to respond back. It was late and I just left the ER after volunteering for 7 hours. You helped me so much. I am going to completely retool it now.

Thanks again. 🙂

 

[mathnerd88]

Definitely! I totally forgot to respond back. It was late and I just left the ER after volunteering for 7 hours. You helped me so much. I am going to completely retool it now.

Thanks again. 🙂

No problem! I'm surprised they let you volunteer that long on a single shift haha.